MrBayless
Posts : 192 Join date : 2015-01-29
| Subject: Ugh I just farted Sat May 16, 2015 8:55 pm | |
| Working on some commission pieces for a friend of her daughter and nephew. Tried to go for a very pastel pallet to add to the adorable beach stuff. this one... I have no idea what else to do as far as background wise | |
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neil Admin
Posts : 287 Join date : 2015-01-18
| Subject: Re: Ugh I just farted Sat May 16, 2015 9:01 pm | |
| in the piece with the background you've got a ton of hugely dramatic lighting implied by her shadow on the beach, but very little of it is actually reflected on the character - it feels like the light is coming from a different direction. I did this really quick so your mileage may vary, but I'm REASONABLY sure that makes sense | |
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Garvals
Posts : 220 Join date : 2015-01-18
| Subject: Re: Ugh I just farted Sun May 17, 2015 4:03 am | |
| About background - just add some white stylized clouds that will fit your picture: | |
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BaronVonJello
Posts : 145 Join date : 2015-01-29
| Subject: Re: Ugh I just farted Tue May 19, 2015 10:50 pm | |
| Gotta agree with Garvals up there. Add in some stylized clouds or some kind of break in the sky just so it doesn't seem like a hazy blob. I like the colors, but it just needs a little something more so it's not so vacant. | |
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