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ehm
Posts : 9
Join date : 2015-05-16
Age : 35
Location : quin ZEE
| Subject: an illustrated ehmcyclopedia  Sun May 17, 2015 10:49 am | |
|  I realised I can't post the stuff I'm actually working on until next month so HEY SKETCH DISCO I AM GLAD YOU ARE A THING have this instead for now. | |
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y2jenn
Posts : 294
Join date : 2015-01-18
| | Subject: Re: an illustrated ehmcyclopedia Mon May 18, 2015 9:57 pm | |
| I know we're supposed to have insightful and helpful things to say to each other here, but oh god, I just wanna go on forever about how glorious this is. haha!
I will say your lovely lineart gets a little lost in his dark coloring for me. I'd play around a little with the contrast there so your lines stand out a bit more.
Just way too cute. | |
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Ty
Posts : 289
Join date : 2015-01-24
| | Subject: Re: an illustrated ehmcyclopedia Wed May 20, 2015 4:51 pm | |
| The weight in this is so perfectly balanced. I'm a little disturbed, wondering where you clearly must have gotten photo reference of me at home. | |
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burnturn
Posts : 15
Join date : 2015-05-18
| | Subject: Re: an illustrated ehmcyclopedia Thu May 21, 2015 8:28 am | |
| I'm disturbed that someone has actually figured out how to put Godzilla in hotpants and make the result look... alluring. | |
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ehm
Posts : 9
Join date : 2015-05-16
Age : 35
Location : quin ZEE
| | Subject: Re: an illustrated ehmcyclopedia Sat May 30, 2015 11:58 pm | |
| @Jenn - agh, thanks haha! & You're absolutely right about the contrast/values. It's definitely something I need to work on being more mindful of. - burnturn wrote:
- I'm disturbed that someone has actually figured out how to put Godzilla in hotpants and make the result look... alluring.
See Ty's comment. The reference photo was already alluring -- in fact, a little too hot for me to handle. I toned it down a bit, if you can believe that. | |
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ehm
Posts : 9
Join date : 2015-05-16
Age : 35
Location : quin ZEE
| | Subject: Re: an illustrated ehmcyclopedia Sun May 31, 2015 12:23 am | |
| All right, here's some of the things I've done in the last couple months: (I can't alter these, since they're completed items for a game, but critique & commentary is always rad so) | |
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burnturn
Posts : 15
Join date : 2015-05-18
| | Subject: Re: an illustrated ehmcyclopedia Thu Jun 04, 2015 11:03 am | |
| You are in a VILLAGE SHOPPE. Which ITEM will you take?
[take adorable cat]
You cannot take ADORABLE CAT.
[take adorable cat]
You cannot take ADORABLE CAT.
[take adorable cat]
[take adorable cat]
[take adorable cat]
[take adorable cat]
You have been eaten by a GRUE.
I can't think of anything real critiquey to say even if these weren't finished and submitted. They're all so crisp looking in that 'classic Dorling-Kindersly book illustration' way. | |
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Blix
Posts : 1
Join date : 2015-05-19
| | Subject: Re: an illustrated ehmcyclopedia Tue Jun 09, 2015 7:15 am | |
| Few things I'm spotting is the kitten's snoot is a little too bunched up. Could give em a little more space for his little baby cheeks and chinny chin chin. And the size of one of the front legs is off by just a haiir.
Those and the fact that youre art is way too good for the site in question but yanno.. | |
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